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??? [mc135f] - Wyrm Stage

Published: Feb 14, 2017

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bishel bishen dragon dragons female hatchling light machesri realm red wyrm bishenrealm bisheldragons

Description

A Bishen Realm / BishenRealm adoption. Bishel dragons are growing adoptions earned by submitting art or writing for each stage.

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Dragon: ???
ID#: mc135f
Description: Machesri Light Red Female Wyrm
Bondmate: Gaylen
Adopter: EndaraMae (

)
Mutations: Light color variant
Special Characteristics: Jade bangles
Clutch: Machesri Clutch 14: Wild

Notes: This little one is fiercely strong and has more wisdom than your average wyrm. There is a light and goodness that shines from her and makes others want to trust her.

Story

Royalty

Past Stages

Machesri Female Egg (Current Version) by indyana

This image is only available for use by the Bishen Realm / BishenRealm adopter to whom this dragon belongs. No one else is granted any rights to use this image.
Use of this image by the adopter is dictated by the Image Usage Terms on the Bishen Realm website:
bishen.indyslair.net/adoption/…

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Comments27

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Cyber-Cypher

Feb 25, 2017

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Aww! OvO I like how the worm-like creature had little spikes which make look spunky but still cute! ^ w ^

Here is a list of things you can improve on:

- The line art looks a bit too thick and it should more variety in width so that it would look more alive.

- Jut me being nitpicky here. The way the beaded bracelet is placed is kind of unnatural. One side would be top of that one spike while another side would be sliding down.

- The spacing of the spikes looks uneven. There's a wide gap where you could have added a spike.

Overall, your strongest points are that it looks adorable and the how you use neutral background which helps with the colors. Hope this helps! ^_^